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« on: February 08, 2010, 11:34:03 PM »
Naivety is like a blossom, he laughed.
with a simple smile and slow blinking eyes.
Trust rested somewhere deep that day
maybe in his pocket.
to be discarded later
with other old manboy prizes.
She was one.
Where did his naked shame go, she wondered
Hers, squirmed and squeezed quietly
Lifeless under his weight.

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« Reply #1 on: February 09, 2010, 03:24:33 PM »
Nicely written and concise. Just still not sure I follow the jist of it. Thanks for posting. At least I know one other person is alive out there. lol

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« Reply #2 on: February 10, 2010, 12:50:05 PM »
I modified it. Hopefully it's easier to grasp. *Crosses fingers* lol

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